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Banjobach
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by Banjobach » Mon Mar 09, 2009 1:31 am
So this one is really short. I'm all about minimizing suffering.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tw062a1542I
Ages:
Look at time sneaking by
all these lives gone awry
All I see are tired souls
staring through their car windows
I wonder,
is this how I grow old
I feel this
numbness taking hold
I was small, dreamt it all
climb a fence, kick a ball
Now I talk a certain way
Bigger words and less to say
I wonder,
Is this how I grow old
I feel this
empty taking hold
I wonder, wonder,
how I'll make it home
Hope you enjoy.
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by markTR » Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:28 am
Cool song man, not much to critique really.

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by Klondog » Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:15 pm
Nice. Enjoyed it.
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by Banjobach » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:03 pm
Thank you, as always, for listening gentlemen.
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by sfmartins » Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:28 am
Sounds really good.
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by Grachi » Tue May 19, 2009 10:01 pm
awesome awesome stuff. love the lyrics. Always find the most powerful lyrics are the ones that have less to say but more of a meaning to them.
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