new song 'Don't Go'... have a listen :)

[vinestreet98]

Don't Go:
http://www.purevolume.com/maxjordan

Let me know what you think

It's a bit experimental... Some of the lyrics that I sung in this recording are jibberish cuz I forgot the actual lyrics, so here they are below:

I was just on my way home
I lost my mind tonight
I'm just feelin kinda high
and you seem alright

Don't go

Sometime later, settled in
It's Sunday take a drive
I'm just feelin kinda high
and you treat me right

Don't go

Stay with me
Don't leave
You go and you're gone
Just see me
And I can see
I can see

[ut4ever8]

I like what you did with that man. It sounds really good. At first I wasn't sure how I felt about the effects added to the voice, but I thought the last minute of the song was really strong. I would think it would sound a little better if you sang the first two verses with no effects on the voice and then when you build up to that outro throw in the reverb or delay or whatever it was on your voice to make it stick out even more. I liked the song though. Really simple lyrics...I like it that way. The only thing I would mention about that aspect of the song is what you use the phrase "Im just feelin kinda high" twice. I don't think theres anything at all wrong with any drug references, I think they're great as a matter of fact. Sometimes I just think some people force it in their lyrics because its trendy, kinda like "that guy" who shows up to a party and makes sure to tell everyone how wasted he is. I don't think thats the case here, it didn't change my opinion of the song. It was just something that caught my attention. Overall I enjoyed it, keep it up and keep posting them.

[vinestreet98]

played it out for the first time 2 nights ago... check out the video:

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ... d=37060752

[d.m.b41]

hey, i think it's great, maybe someday there wil be a "www.mjordantabs.com" you never know