Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

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Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

Unread post by Dheibs » Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:39 pm

and I am wondering if you could take a listen and please critique some songs, i havent asked anyone to listen yet, so you will be giving me the first honest opinion. thanks again. the link is below.

http://www.myspace.com/daveheibergermusic


thanks again!
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Dec 10, 2007 6:29 pm

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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

Unread post by markTR » Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:32 pm

I think the guitar playing is pretty good. The vocals could be a little stronger. Overall you got some nice stuff, thanks for posting
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:53 pm

markTR wrote:I think the guitar playing is pretty good. The vocals could be a little stronger. Overall you got some nice stuff, thanks for posting
hey, thanks for the input. thanks for listening!
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...

Unread post by lyrics101 » Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:43 pm

YOU GOT TO FIND A WAY

Turn town the snare, up the mid & treble portions of the vocals so they come through more. This sounds like the type of song where the lyrics are more important than the vocal part itself.

On a whole not bad. I want more to happen, to be frank.

Let's Do It All Night, I like a lot, but the same problems with the vocal mix.
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