My Number 34

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mnb5023
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My Number 34

Unread post by mnb5023 » Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:35 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=112sa1v1Cp8

This is my attempt at #34 i know that it gets fast at parts but i just in way want to get my self out there. i was wondering if i could get some tips or anything thing you can give me thanks

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Unread post by taparoo » Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:55 am

It's choppy and doesn't feel comfortable at all. Towards the end it just sounds like you're going through the motions, like you're bored with the song and can't wait to be done playing it. This is one of those songs, cheesy as it sounds, you need to feel to be able to play well. Judging by the video, you're not ready to tackle a song like this. I would suggest playing along with the album version, and getting that set tempo and beat in your head, to the point where you can play it comfortably and relaxed.

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Unread post by afurth » Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:40 am

work on less intricate songs. get your strumming patterns and chord progressions to be SILKY before you tackle djm compositions.

some of his shit is crazy complex. that's like learning to play basketball before you can walk.
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