Cannonball Cover (vid)

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Cannonball Cover (vid)

Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:08 pm

I love this song, i hope I did it justice.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6YXp6ivXO8

anything you guys can help me with would be great!
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Unread post by whatshername » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:22 pm

sometimes you make facial expressions that make you look like anthony kiedis
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:25 pm

whatshername wrote:sometimes you make facial expressions that make you look like anthony kiedis
i dont know if thats a good thing or a bad thing, but i know i make some pretty hilarious faces while playing. i cannot focus on playing, singing, and not looking like an ass all at the same time. i have enough trouble with the first two...

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Unread post by whatshername » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:26 pm

it's a good thing :)
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Unread post by ut4ever8 » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:45 pm

Your voice is still improving, keep that going. Something about the guitar sounds off, i cant really pinpoint it but it sounds like maybe you played a tab thats not exactly right or something. Sorry that might not be that helpful. Other than that just put your hat on straight and keep up the good work.
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:07 pm

ut4ever8 wrote:Your voice is still improving, keep that going. Something about the guitar sounds off, i cant really pinpoint it but it sounds like maybe you played a tab thats not exactly right or something. Sorry that might not be that helpful. Other than that just put your hat on straight and keep up the good work.
its my own little variation, but i didnt skip any notes to the best of my knowledge.. just threw in some hammers.

thanks for the help!
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Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:35 pm

you look freakishly like my little brother sometimes..its very weird

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:55 pm

HumbleMonkey wrote:you look freakishly like my little brother sometimes..its very weird
he must be a ladykiller. :?
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Unread post by iha » Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:20 pm

as usual, not bad but vocals need more improvement. i would say the vocals were there most of the song with only minor problems here and there. at least from what i can tell. the guitar seemed fine to me.

gj overall

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:25 pm

iha wrote:as usual, not bad but vocals need more improvement. i would say the vocals were there most of the song with only minor problems here and there. at least from what i can tell. the guitar seemed fine to me.

gj overall

i always feel like im looking up your nose on your videos (until i minimize and just listen :lol: )
haha yeh the mic on my computer is next to the keyboard and i get A LOT better sound quality, especially from the guitar, when the laptop is below the guitar. thus the worms eye view.

thanks for listening.
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Unread post by Blake » Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:35 pm

I'm still amazed at how much you've improved over the last year or two. Great job man.

Now if you could just work on the ugly thing, you'd be golden

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:37 pm

btbesong wrote:I'm still amazed at how much you've improved over the last year or two. Great job man.

Now if you could just work on the ugly thing, you'd be golden
blame god. not my fault.

and thank you.
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Unread post by AlpineValley » Wed Apr 11, 2007 1:10 am

looks good. :thumbsup:
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Unread post by justanotherfan » Wed Apr 11, 2007 4:18 pm

I enjoyed it......thanks for posting it. Oh...I don't think you are all that ugly :wink: . After all you seem to give someone "the chills". :D

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Unread post by mangold » Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:50 pm

justanotherfan wrote:I enjoyed it......thanks for posting it. Oh...I don't think you are all that ugly :wink: . After all you seem to give someone "the chills". :D

:)
god that girl is freaking creepy

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