**Please Critique**

[a1075dd63aa12]

I haven't been playing the guitar much lately due to being busy with school and work. Anyway, I was bored a few days ago, and decided to play a little bit and try to write something. The following is what I came up with, it is kind of short, and I have no big plans for it, I was just curious to see what you all thought of it.

Thanks in advance.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/w03qar

[Banjobach]

really pretty. As it is, its very soothing. It was nice for the rough day ive been having. Dunno if you want to put lyrics to it or not, but i think its possible. I like it though. It almost sounds like a track to a movie. Like the part thats the most poignant or the part that leads up to it. Not bad for just pickin the instrument up again.

[a1075dd63aa12]

thanks for the critique, im really bad at finishing off songs and i kind of like this one how it is nice, short and simple.

[RunsWithBuffalo]

I like it a lot but you really should cut it to about a minute and make a real song out of it. Im not saying using the same riff, but use the same chords so that it transitions nicely. It really would make a bad ass instrumental intro.

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just in case.

[a1075dd63aa12]

I like it a lot but you really should cut it to about a minute and make a real song out of it. Im not saying using the same riff, but use the same chords so that it transitions nicely. It really would make a bad ass instrumental intro.

i thought about doing the same thing with the intro. i dont really take writing stuff that seriously anymore, so i doubt anything will ever come of it, but i will definitely keep it in mind. thanks for checking it out.