my little raven

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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Sun Oct 22, 2006 7:41 pm

here is a version i did. i think it turned out well. have a listen from yousendit.

http://download.yousendit.com/E4643E5F2F98DABE
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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:46 pm

anyone want to give me some feedback. i would like to hear some.
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Unread post by Banjobach » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:19 pm

Sounds like a good rendition to me. The vocals sort of seem like you are trying to sound like something other than your natural voice. And around 1:20 it sounds like you forgot the words. The violin seems a tad out of tune, but can never really tell with those things. One second they are screeching and then the next second they make the sweetest noises. The guitar was pretty solid as far as i could tell. I cant really put my finger on what it is about your vocals, maybe someone else can say, or maybe nothing is wrong with them and im just being a prick.

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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:41 pm

Badass, I love playing this song, and although the fiddle does seem a bit out of tune, it gives it a spooky element. I think it would sound better if the tempo was a little slower, maybe alot slower. Your voice has a raspy sound, its ok I guess. Thanks for Posting.
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