Sleeping At LAst "Umbrellas" Cover

[jaydog]

Sleeping at Last
Umbrellas

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feedback please, thanks.

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[Appfro]

the guitar is great. especially the lead tracks. but, and i'm sorry to say this, i couldn't get through it because of the vocals. you're so whispery and you're singing right through your throat and nose. you gotta reach back in there a little bit and sing from your diaphragm. you can sing soft and whispery and still make it strong, and that's what you're lacking. my suggestion would be to try some louder stronger vocal songs before attempting the softer ones. as miguel used to say, wake everyone else up in the building. use your diaphragm to project your voice and don't be afraid to belt that stuff out.

like i said, what i heard of the guitar sounded great, i would say keep that up cause i didn't hear anything wrong w/ that. just work on those vocals man

[jaydog]

yeah listening again you are right, i was sitting down when i sang and i am recording in my room and i get self conscious about singing to loud and others in the house will hear me. Thanks for the criticism.