Spirit of the Past (original)

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Spirit of the Past (original)

Unread post by globex » Mon Aug 28, 2006 6:39 pm

Hey,

New original demo song "Spirit of the Past". Still having a hard time with the quality...
Listen at http://www.the7thguest.ca/
or download at http://www.the7thguest.ca/mp3/the_7th_g ... e_past.mp3
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Unread post by Banjobach » Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:50 pm

It has a very ambient feel to it. It flowed generally smooth. I couldnt really understand what you were saying. But i dunno if you were going for the kaki king approach and drowning your voice out on purpose. There were a few parts where the two guitars collided rythmically but they straightened themselves out pretty quickly. Overall though it was very relaxing. Kinda like Krishna Das. IF you havent heard of that guy seriously go listen. Its Hindu music but its so calming.
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Unread post by mangold » Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:57 pm

its a pretty chill song. i like it and dont have much to comment on

i would like to know where you picked up that media player for your site
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Unread post by globex » Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:51 am

mangold wrote:its a pretty chill song. i like it and dont have much to comment on

i would like to know where you picked up that media player for your site
Hey,

Thanks. The Flash MP3 player that I use can be downloaded for free at:
http://www.jeroenwijering.com/?item=Flash_MP3_Player

Best player I've seen. Does everything you want it to.
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:39 am

i like it. reminds me of an iron and wine song. really chill, easy to listen to.

the only thing i don't like about it is the percussion. it actually interrupts the flow of the song imo. someting much softer or perhaps nothing at all.

anyway, good song.

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Unread post by globex » Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:49 pm

Based on the comments I've received I've made a few editing changes. Should be a little better now.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:00 am

I like the song.

Everything is very solid, and that's a constant in your songs.

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Unread post by TimmyJ4140 » Thu Aug 31, 2006 2:53 am

Very chill song. Love the dual vocal lines, the harmonies and such. Like the "dueling guitars" sound goin' on. Not much more to say, just a laid back, "airy" kinda song. I like it.
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