**Lyrics and Recording** Please give me input!!

[rockyall107]

this is the newest song i wrote...amongst many that are just throw away songs..i think this one may be a keeper..i just wrote it so anything that needs to be added or taken away please let me know...the recording is coming..tell me what you think of the lyrics

Untitled I (unfinished)

Expect what I can, though i got to get by..
a worried day comes crashing through my mind..
in the distant a fog i cant seem to find..
the road travled there, it will clear in time..

fill the spaces with hope to dream..
on top of the world staring at the city..
even in my finest time i know ill be
Screaming in a crowd and no one can hear me..


Alright, can i find..
a better way to get things
straightened out

So Hard.
yet so right..
each day goes by
gets the pain away..


time to move
time to kill..
time after time
im searching for..

a false hope..
a new mind..
give up the world now..
the time can be mine..


and ill figure out my own damn way..
do what ill do..say what ill say
no suit no dime is gonna change my way..
its do or bust before the end of the day..

ohhh time to get in line..

[mangold]

i see no recording! BALDERDASH! SHENANIGANS!