Ah its about time I posted this: Beast in the Bathhouse

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Ah its about time I posted this: Beast in the Bathhouse

Unread post by Teego Time » Sun Jul 09, 2006 2:12 pm

So I had a buddy who was going to do some gutiarwork over this song, but he never really got around to it, so I'm just going to post it now.

It was recorded a while ago when my voice was acting up. Thats about the only excuse I'm going to offer. =)

Anyways, the intro is a little lick that I heard a long time ago from a friend of mine. And umm.. oh yeah here are the lyrics and song!


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Beast in the Bathhouse

Grab your friend Tina
Cuz you’re going out tonight
Grab your friend Crissy
Careful not to fall on the ice

In twelve hours you’ll be back again
You’ve been awake for so long
Not that it matters
At least you came home

You’ve heard of dozens who’ve died
But that’s alright, because you don’t care
About anything
Or anyone else at all

I’m like that
Is what you said
I’m innocent
It couldn’t happen to me
That’s what you said
But it did

Put the straw to your nose
I hope you fall forward and it goes
Straight through to your brain
And pokes another hole

Inhale, feel it burn
In five minutes you won’t care
You won’t care about anything
Or anyone else at all
Anyone else at all

This chalk outline is straight
Marked by the diamonds in your eyes
Speckled birds fly over your head
Picking the halo apart

Grab your friend the juggler
And journey with him to the land of Oz
Don’t forget your stovetop
Diamonds folds

And we won’t see you again
For another twelve hours or so
While your punding it out
In the bathhouse
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:05 pm

really nice teegs, its a great piece, cant really pick out too much that could use improvement.
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Unread post by Teego Time » Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:06 pm

Dude, 72 views and one comment!? Come on, I don't have the means to post shit in here more often, at least humor me a bit. :D
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.
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Unread post by markTR » Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:09 pm

Agree with wkp, great stuff man. I really dig the lyrics.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:24 pm

Its pretty nice man.

The intro is long and cool.

Great stuff.
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Unread post by ut4ever8 » Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:54 pm

sounds pretty good, one of my favorite originals ive heard on here
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Unread post by Teego Time » Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:11 am

Wow, thanks for all the great comments everyone!
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.
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