Sugar Will ..anyone give me a few tips?

[whirl_it_up]

Lurk around this boards a lot, but never hardly post buttt just need a few tips from pepole with this Sugar will tune.

Lately I've been listening to it loads and really lovin the tune and would love to play it proper nice. I've been playing it for a few days now and recorded this today, it's real short, but just to give you the jist of how I play it...

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 5B6896550E

..any tips on how I can make this better would be nice thank youuu

Clare~