new song

[HumbleMonkey]

here's another new song I wrote this afternoon

its called Broken Ha Ha

http://www.angelfire.com/funky/humblemonkey/


comments/critiques please

[dmbguitar718]

Shit man, tune your guitar! Aside from that, it sounds very cookie cutter. Pretty unoriginal. Kinda like a camp song. And turn the harp down.

[HumbleMonkey]

Shit man, tune your guitar! Aside from that, it sounds very cookie cutter. Pretty unoriginal. Kinda like a camp song. And turn the harp down.

haha i know guitar was bad out of tune and recording quality is crap. im just recording with one cheap computer mic, sry about the harp sound i'll just play back farther i guess. but songwise idk i dont usually play very complex guitar riffs, usually simple melodies. i worry more about lyrics and i guess however i feel about the song.

but definitely thanks for your comments

if you wouldnt mind i have more stuff over here
http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic.php?t=29975