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Unread post by DMwannaB » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:41 pm

I played both parts. Let me know what you guys think!

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:14 pm

First of all it was out of tune, but thats an easy fix. Rythmically didn't flow very well and sounded a bit jumbled. On the flip side the recording quality was descent, and parts sounded like they could be turned into a song but together they sounded out of place.
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