Here are some lyrics. Ima try and record some stuff later.

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Here are some lyrics. Ima try and record some stuff later.

Unread post by Teego Time » Wed Mar 08, 2006 5:58 pm

Here's a song I wrote, hope ya'll like the lyrics.

It’s that moment when you look in her eyes
Between wrinkled eyebrows and broken smiles
It’s that moment when you realize
That the magic you had somewhere
Turned into a lie

Heart racing, don’t forget to breathe
Stomach’s in a knot, you can barely speak
Much less think of the words to say
So you think of how you could have done it
Differently

Mama said just the other day oh don’t you know
Girls like that, they always come and go
Well I find that, hard to digest
When I thought this was different from the rest

So you wonder if there’s another guy
Who stole her heart away from your life
Who was better than you, in some aspect
Who knew how to get what you took for granted

Ain’t it funny how time seems to slip away
When you’ve got something you’re so desperately trying to save
Days go by and you don’t even know
And it’s funny how things can change

When did love seem to lose its meaning
Was it when we stopped giving or receiving
Oh when did your eyes lose their spark
Why’d you keep me tucked in the dark

When did I love you seem to change its face
To something fake that you don’t really want to say
What happened to those times we had
Because certainly it wasn’t all bad

It always seems like you can’t do anything
To prevent what you think is impending
So she says, maybe it’s for the best
Sure doesn’t feel like it

You’re both just two kids scared and confused
Running away from what you don’t want to do
Are your problems really that bad
Most likely not, that’s what’s sad

Well I thought this was different from the rest
All those talks of how we were the best
The connection seems broken now
So I think I’ll just go
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.

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Unread post by onid41 » Wed Mar 08, 2006 6:29 pm

*steals lyrics*
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Wed Mar 08, 2006 6:29 pm

Very long. Not bad though. I like the "Ain't it funny how time seems to slip away" :wink:
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Unread post by Teego Time » Thu Mar 09, 2006 1:52 am

Coldchillin23222 wrote:Very long. Not bad though. I like the "Ain't it funny how time seems to slip away" :wink:
A little cliche I know, but I figured the next line made up for it. :D
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
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Unread post by Coldchillin » Sat Mar 11, 2006 12:57 pm

I reread it after remembering how insensitive my original remarks were. I really do like it. Let me know if there's music. Otherwise I am stealing it and calling it my own :lol: Seriously though, record it when you get some music.
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Unread post by Teego Time » Sat Mar 11, 2006 4:07 pm

Coldchillin23222 wrote:I reread it after remembering how insensitive my original remarks were. I really do like it. Let me know if there's music. Otherwise I am stealing it and calling it my own :lol: Seriously though, record it when you get some music.
Oh I never thought you were being mean or anything. :D

Hopefully I'm going to record it next week. Yeah it's a full blown song- music and all. I love it.
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.

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Unread post by mdel21 » Sat Mar 11, 2006 4:48 pm

Willie Nelson?

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Unread post by Teego Time » Sat Mar 11, 2006 5:50 pm

mdel21 wrote:Willie Nelson?
Who's that?
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.

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Unread post by mdel21 » Sun Mar 12, 2006 8:41 am

He's this country singer, might be popular someday. He's pretty good.

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Unread post by J_Clark » Sun Mar 12, 2006 6:11 pm

onid41 wrote:*steals lyrics*
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