Intro/Solo idea for one of my songs

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Intro/Solo idea for one of my songs

Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Feb 06, 2006 5:14 pm

I was playing around with this today as an intro and possible solo idea for one of my songs. Please don't critique the quality, i just set this down as an idea, im more interested as to what you think of the playing, a little too busy?

http://s27.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1Z0J ... TQPTPN3DXN
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Unread post by Kahn » Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:24 pm

I dont think it sounds too clulttered. But I would make the 2 guitars the same level. I feel like the one playing lead is too loud. Maybe that would make it sound better.

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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Mon Feb 06, 2006 10:11 pm

Kahn wrote:I dont think it sounds too clulttered. But I would make the 2 guitars the same level. I feel like the one playing lead is too loud. Maybe that would make it sound better.
ya as i listen too it more i realize one of them was a bit louder.
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