New Original Acoustic (tapping) song.. PLZ RATE

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New Original Acoustic (tapping) song.. PLZ RATE

Unread post by Batstone » Fri Dec 09, 2005 11:50 pm

hey.. i jsut recorded a demo of an acosutic song ive been fooling with for a few days...its all 2 hand tapping, except for the chord part....

Its not finished yet, and i knwo its a rough recording ie. timming and wrong notes lol.. but yeah, wat do u ithnk of it as an idea? thanks

by the way... yes i know my bottom string was out of tune at the start

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Unread post by TheGameV30 » Sat Dec 10, 2005 1:26 am

not bad....definitely has that cool American Baby Intro to it where it starts out slow, picks up at the chorus and then back down again...not too shabby... 8-)
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Sun Dec 11, 2005 9:43 pm

some good ideas in there man, but it needs transition and flow, and a melody focus.
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Unread post by Cor » Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:02 pm

the chord breakdown didn't flow too well, but you mentioned it was a demo, so it's cool. I'd rework that part, but it soudns like you have some good ideas in there.

Just a suggestion.. maybe, in the first theme, after you use those three bass notes, you could do a little call and response and interject something higher or maybe harmonize on those notes or something.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:57 pm

take a visit here, and listen to "parallel lines". this song is all tapping, you'll pick up some good stuffs from this. so listen to it.
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Unread post by Teego Time » Mon Dec 12, 2005 5:33 pm

Hey man want to rehost that sucker so I can listen?
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