Lyrics that I'm rather proud of.

Teego Time · Unread post by **Teego Time** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 11:35 pm

Here's a song that I wrote. Lets see if you guys can figure out what inspired me.

Beast in the Bathhouse

Grab your friend Tina
Cuz you’re going out tonight
Grab your friend Crissy
Careful not to fall on the ice

In twelve hours you’ll be back again
You’ve been awake for so long
But that’s alright
Because you’ve come home

You’ve heard of dozens who’ve died
But that’s alright, because you don’t care
About anything
Or anyone else at all

I’m not that type of person
Is what you said
I’m innocent
It couldn’t happen to me
Is what you said
But it did

Put the straw to your nose
I hope you fall forward and it goes
Through your brain
And pokes one more hole
Not like it would matter anyway

Inhale, feel it burn
In five minutes you won’t care
You won’t care about anything
Or anyone else at all
Anyone else at all

This chalk outline is straight
Marked by the diamonds in your eyes
Speckled birds fly over your head
Picking the halo apart

Grab your friend the juggler
And journey with him to Oz
Don’t forget your stovetop
Diamonds folds

And we won’t see you again
For another twelve hours or so
While your punding it out
In the bathhouse

nagapantala · Unread post by **nagapantala** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 6:29 am

pretty good, i particurarly liked the 3rd and 2nd to last verses....nice usage imagery and metaphor

are you upset at a girl? a sel-centered one would be my guess

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:46 am

Crystal meth

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:47 am

"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:35 am

jellyfish wrote:"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.

His post about Crystal Meth in nDmb had nothing to do with it though, right? :lol:

Teego Time · Unread post by **Teego Time** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:08 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
jellyfish wrote:"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.
His post about Crystal Meth in nDmb had nothing to do with it though, right?

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:21 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
jellyfish wrote:"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.
His post about Crystal Meth in nDmb had nothing to do with it though, right?

actually no.

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:23 am

jellyfish wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
jellyfish wrote:"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.
His post about Crystal Meth in nDmb had nothing to do with it though, right?
actually no.

actually zippit!

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:27 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
jellyfish wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
jellyfish wrote:"Tina" & "Ice"gave it away.
His post about Crystal Meth in nDmb had nothing to do with it though, right?
actually no.
actually zippit!

i read the first verse and knew exactly what he meant. I did look at his crystal meth thread but briefly. The question is, Why is Teego writing about a drug that he has never done? Is he being accurate with his assumptions. I think 12 hours is a bit too long to go without a bump, or it's too long for a meth trip to last.

Teego Time · Unread post by **Teego Time** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 5:11 pm

jellyfish wrote:
i read the first verse and knew exactly what he meant. I did look at his crystal meth thread but briefly. The question is, Why is Teego writing about a drug that he has never done? Is he being accurate with his assumptions. I think 12 hours is a bit too long to go without a bump, or it's too long for a meth trip to last.

Most sources said anywhere from 2-16 hours, but a lot mentioned 12 as the average number. Anyhow it's not implied in the song whether there was bumping or not.

Don't try to tell me that I don't know anything about it, just because I haven't experienced it doesn't mean that I didn't do my research. I've talked to poeple who have done the drug, I know people who've died from it, and personally I'm fed up with it. Can I hate a drug I've never done? Damn right I can. At least I tried to educate myself about it, it's more than most of those ignorant religious fucks can say.

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 5:23 pm

Teego Time wrote:
jellyfish wrote:
i read the first verse and knew exactly what he meant. I did look at his crystal meth thread but briefly. The question is, Why is Teego writing about a drug that he has never done? Is he being accurate with his assumptions. I think 12 hours is a bit too long to go without a bump, or it's too long for a meth trip to last.
Most sources said anywhere from 2-16 hours, but a lot mentioned 12 as the average number. Anyhow it's not implied in the song whether there was bumping or not.

Don't try to tell me that I don't know anything about it, just because I haven't experienced it doesn't mean that I didn't do my research. I've talked to poeple who have done the drug, I know people who've died from it, and personally I'm fed up with it. Can I hate a drug I've never done? Damn right I can. At least I tried to educate myself about it, it's more than most of those ignorant religious fucks can say.

Chill out little man. Geez, usually lyrics come from personal experinences. Just wondering where your's came from.

Teego Time · Unread post by **Teego Time** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 5:59 pm

jellyfish wrote:
Teego Time wrote:
jellyfish wrote:
i read the first verse and knew exactly what he meant. I did look at his crystal meth thread but briefly. The question is, Why is Teego writing about a drug that he has never done? Is he being accurate with his assumptions. I think 12 hours is a bit too long to go without a bump, or it's too long for a meth trip to last.
Most sources said anywhere from 2-16 hours, but a lot mentioned 12 as the average number. Anyhow it's not implied in the song whether there was bumping or not.

Don't try to tell me that I don't know anything about it, just because I haven't experienced it doesn't mean that I didn't do my research. I've talked to poeple who have done the drug, I know people who've died from it, and personally I'm fed up with it. Can I hate a drug I've never done? Damn right I can. At least I tried to educate myself about it, it's more than most of those ignorant religious fucks can say.
Chill out little man. Geez, usually lyrics come from personal experinences. Just wondering where your's came from.

Oh I'm sorry, I didn't mean for that to come across as agrivated! Haha, I was totally cool with what you wrote. I just wanted to make sure you knew where I was coming from.

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 6:20 pm

Good lyrics by the way Teego.

c_tietze · Unread post by **c_tietze** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:23 pm

meth sucks and is a waste of money

Teego Time · Unread post by **Teego Time** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:17 pm

c_tietze wrote:meth sucks and is a waste of money

I can't honestly say that because I've never done it. But I do know it has horrible consiquences if you become addicted.

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Lyrics that I'm rather proud of.

Lyrics that I'm rather proud of.

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