2 new (non dave) covers

[jseymour_va]

I have posted before and my vocals were way way and I mean way off. I was singing in the wrong key, wrong note, that made everything so far off I've taken a couple vocal lesson and wanted to see if you guys that have reviewed me before would take the time out to see if my singing is getting any better. Any advice and feedback would be appreciated.

Songs: Foo Fighters, Times like these
Pearl Jam, Elderly Women

http://www.seymourtech.com/music.html

P.S. Times like these was done on 4.20

Thanks James

[firedancer86]

ok...

EWBTCIAST...(geez...thats a long acronym)...that is your own style...it is cool, but you do realize you put it in 4/4 timing...too many chops between chord changes in the main/verse prog...some rough spots, but you can never diss progress man...its cool to see that you are taking lessons too...the thing I believe you need to work on is keeping time...not speeding up in certain parts, but that is natural and can be worked out over time...the FF cover was better...you vocals sounded confident and smooth...you just need to put work into it man...I cheer you on and commend your progress man...keep at it

[jseymour_va]

ok...

EWBTCIAST...(geez...thats a long acronym):

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