Song Lyrics I wrote

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Song Lyrics I wrote

Unread post by czech » Fri Jul 22, 2005 10:13 am

So i was thinkign about doing a recording, but i wanted to get feedback on my lyrics first.

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I like fat girls
I like bacardi
so come on baby
lets go party

*up tempo*
I'll buy you a rum n coke
we'll tell dead baby jokes
you dont have to be shy
because i'm fat too

*keep up tempo*
I like fat girls
I like bacardi
so come on baby
lets go party

I'll chop some lines of coke
we'll tell dead hebrew jokes
you dont have to be shy
because i'm fat too

accapella*
fat people hump eachother thats what we dooooooooo
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Unread post by Swede » Fri Jul 22, 2005 10:26 am

i really like the I'll chop some lines of coke
we'll tell dead hebrew jokes
Gravel in your shoes may be diamonds, but it hurts anyway..
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Unread post by DMB Joy Ride » Sun Jul 24, 2005 3:59 pm

Hey, lyrics don't mean everything so that could still come out sounding awesome
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Unread post by thejoe » Sun Jul 24, 2005 7:12 pm

record that, its fucking awesome
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Sun Jul 24, 2005 7:16 pm

*tear*
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Unread post by NoNotThat » Mon Jul 25, 2005 4:07 pm

I'm moved as well...very emotional shit, checkii
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Unread post by Kukini » Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:11 pm

i like it, has a sort of... well you know, feeling to it.
- Marq
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Re: Song Lyrics I wrote

Unread post by onid41 » Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:37 pm

checkii wrote:So i was thinkign about doing a recording, but i wanted to get feedback on my lyrics first.

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so come on baby
lets go party
venga boys?
-dino
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