Dave Matthews Cover "What You Are"

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Dave Matthews Cover "What You Are"

Unread post by maxpower00044 » Fri Jul 01, 2005 7:51 pm

I did an acoustic cover of "What You Are". Check it out if you'd like. Sorry if it tops out a bit at the end...silly computer mics.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Jul 01, 2005 8:41 pm

you messed up the link.
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Unread post by trippinbilly314 » Fri Jul 01, 2005 10:43 pm

its good, i like your voice but the guitar intro part/1st part of the verse seems to slow. good job though
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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Sat Jul 02, 2005 4:17 pm

thanks for the imput so far... 8-)

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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Fri Jul 08, 2005 3:51 pm

http://s40.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XZ5 ... TCFJW435CV here is a link for those of you who have to download mp3s...lata

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Fri Jul 08, 2005 7:34 pm

Pretty good. I've found this song to be somewhat difficult to pull off acoustically and you do a fine job. Your voice gets a lot better as the song progresses. I think you should work on your breathing. At some points you are simply out of breath and it's quite obvious. Pretty good rhythm. I give you props for attacking this song. Great emotion. Maybe even a little too much for an acoustic performance but that of course is all opinion.
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Unread post by jellyfish » Fri Jul 08, 2005 9:34 pm

I love playing this song on the acoustic. I think you did a damn good job with the vocals. I didn't hear the breathing problems GLP mentioned, I thought the breathing & spacing worked out great. (Then again he voted for Bush. ;) )

I actually have a very similiar singing style & love when people do different breating patterns & pull them off well as you did. Makes it very interesting. That is unless you like doing 3 chord covers & singing exactly like the artist does.

Great job.

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Sat Jul 09, 2005 4:45 am

jellyfish wrote:(Then again he voted for Bush. ;) )
:lol: But my heart was with Kucinich.
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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Sat Jul 09, 2005 3:54 pm

thanks for all the great comments so far guys! I appreciate it!!!!

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Unread post by borocks » Sun Jul 10, 2005 7:46 am

I thought you did a great job. just try to improve the recording quality of the vocals. when you sang loud it started to sound distorted
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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Sun Jul 10, 2005 1:08 pm

I can't really help the way it records cause im just using my shitty comp mic....

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awesome

Unread post by riebs » Tue Jul 12, 2005 2:58 pm

the guitar was good, and the vocals were just awesome man. i think the emotion was necessary, it's good to get into the song, especially this one. you've got an awesome range vocally. that scream was straight balls out. keep the covers coming man.

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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Tue Jul 12, 2005 3:55 pm

thanks Riebs....yeah...I likes to screaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam

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Unread post by maxpower00044 » Mon Jul 18, 2005 1:36 pm

thanks for the listens everyone! go to http://www.myspace.com/nick0044 some originals and some covers of mine if you wanna check em out!!! peace and hair grease..

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