My NEw SONG

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My NEw SONG

Unread post by CheersDtoT » Tue May 10, 2005 9:57 am

I just finished this song. I would love to hear what you guys think. I know I always talk here in this forum, but never post anything. So here is a song. I hope you guys enjoy it.


http://s34.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=25HP ... GCUUX2ZJXC

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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Tue May 10, 2005 12:10 pm

sounded okay, but the mix needs work. vocals were low, and it sounded too busy, and i thinks that's just mixing levels.
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Unread post by mangold » Tue May 10, 2005 8:21 pm

eww th reverb in trhe beginning offsets the rythm and hurts my brain... when the vocals come it it gets really good, just a little busy. Id love to hear it just raw acoustic.

this is some of the better original work thats been posted on here. keep workin and keep postin.
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Unread post by CheersDtoT » Tue May 10, 2005 10:36 pm

I don't like raw acoustic stuff....it has no....balls. In my opinion.

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Unread post by CheersDtoT » Tue May 10, 2005 11:35 pm

I'm not being mean...."balls" is an AE term.
Also, I don't really mix vocals on top as most people do.

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Unread post by CheersDtoT » Tue May 10, 2005 11:37 pm

You are right about the verb....much too swimmy. I'm going to fix that. I was wondering if you listened to the entire song?

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Unread post by mangold » Wed May 11, 2005 1:59 pm

CheersDtoT wrote:You are right about the verb....much too swimmy. I'm going to fix that. I was wondering if you listened to the entire song?
yeah... and theres an EDIT button
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