Long Black Veil cover

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Long Black Veil cover

Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:28 am

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I did this about a week ago. It's not very good, and the vocal tracks are doubled. I messed up the guitar work a few times, but it's nothing big. Gimmie some feed back.
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Unread post by You_Enjoy_Myself » Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:16 am

The double-tracked vocals don't always align, and at times it sounds a bit jumbled. The guitar sounds good, solid work there. I don't know how confident you are with your singing voice, but I would have liked to hear you give it a bit more during the "Long black veil" part. It sounded like you were speaking the song at certain points, instead of singing. As for the actual recording itself, it seems really good and the quality is above average. Nice work.
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Apr 17, 2005 1:11 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:The double-tracked vocals don't always align, and at times it sounds a bit jumbled. The guitar sounds good, solid work there. I don't know how confident you are with your singing voice, but I would have liked to hear you give it a bit more during the "Long black veil" part. It sounded like you were speaking the song at certain points, instead of singing. As for the actual recording itself, it seems really good and the quality is above average. Nice work.
I'm not comfortable with my singing voice at all, hence why I rarely post recordings. I realize the vocals didn't always line up as well. I normally don't record many covers, I usually just make little peices of originals, post them and see what people think. Eh, either way, thanks for the feed back :D
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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sun Apr 17, 2005 2:13 pm

Nice job

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:05 am

I enjoyed this, particularly the guitar. The vocals seem very suppressed. I think your voice has potential and the best way to realize that is to just let it go. Back to the guitar - great rhythm. I tend to have a difficult time getting the sound I want out of my guitar for this song. You did a great job with it, save for a few minor errors, which you disclaimed.
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:59 am

GreedylilPig wrote:I enjoyed this, particularly the guitar. The vocals seem very suppressed. I think your voice has potential and the best way to realize that is to just let it go. Back to the guitar - great rhythm. I tend to have a difficult time getting the sound I want out of my guitar for this song. You did a great job with it, save for a few minor errors, which you disclaimed.
Thanks a lot. I never really practice singing, but I probably will work on getting better at it once this sucky ass cold I have goes away. Sore ass throat, lots of coughing. it sucks!

I've been told before my guitar rythm is really good by many people, both in person and on here. Thanks for the comments 8)
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