New Originals

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Sun Mar 23, 2003 9:37 pm

Hey guys. Been a while since I've posted anything. Well, I just updated my page and have two new originals up, one of which is complete, and the other nearly complete. The two new ones are the first two listed: "Last Resorts" and "One More Night." The other two are ones that I've put up before, but I don't think everyone's heard them.

I'd love some feedback on anything, the new ones especially.

EDIT: I just realized that I hadn't included the link for the site. It's the one in my sig, but just in case, here it is again:

http://www.davidson.edu/personal/halarson/home.htm

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 10:02 am

Hey tico...i cant download any of these tracks.. is it just me or anyone else having trouble too?

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 10:05 am

Hmm, well, I just tried downloading my own, and it worked for me...

Just right click on the link and select "save target as" and then put it wherever you want on your computer...

Anyone else having problems?

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 11:19 am

No man it dosnt work

it wont let you right click on it at all, and it wont download if you just click on it and wait. I dont know whats wrong but its not working-

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 11:54 am

Ok, guys. I think that I fixed the glitch. I'm really clueless when it comes to this stuff, but hopefully it works this time.

http://www.davidson.edu/personal/halarson/home.htm

It works for me anyway. I can both download and click and listen now.

cave_cricket · Unread post by **cave_cricket** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 12:20 pm

Worked great for me! (i'll listen in a bit cuz well...I have the 3-19-03 show on and I gotta hear that :wink:

)

Tico....are you planning on releasing a CD? also are you planning to actually go anywhere with this?

I think you should.

Peace,

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 12:22 pm

Works for me now

I just got done listening to last resorts, sounds great(the recording is a little rough though), but this is a great song, your voice sounds cool.

DustyDave · Unread post by **DustyDave** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 4:48 pm

Last Resort : Great as the rest of your songs , but as juineaux said , a rough recording , still good though ....

One More Night : This song is really sweet :cry:

touchy , its one of those songs ya gonna lay down a parade of girls with at some party bro , the rhythm and everything is just .... there .... Just remember your strong believes now

.

Can't wait to see if you put some tabs up for it all , and also lyrics

Awesome job

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 5:19 pm

I really like "one more night". The harmony is really cool and really sets the song apart. It has a great pattern for a nice melody(actually i was jamming on the slide while i was listening). But I think this is probably your best song that i have heard of yours. truly great work

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 5:37 pm

Thanks for the replies, guys.

DustyDave · Unread post by **DustyDave** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 6:35 pm

Anytime

Now get a tab up :lol:

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Mon Mar 24, 2003 7:09 pm

Well, Dusty, I don't have the time to hammer out a tab for it right now, but I can put up the lyrics.

Last Resorts:
that's it, i've had it, i'll take no more
i am so tired of waging these endless wars
against myself in the narrow confines
of this my dying mind

this road is long and though i've just started out
my feet ache with the distance of ten thousand miles
how many more are left for me
i don't know, all i want is a small place to breathe

cause this is my time of last resorts
and this is a place where rivers end their run
and it's oceans i want but deserts i have
but i will not stop until i have found your shores again

and there i will finally rest
in the saftey of your beautiful wings
cause i love you
and i need you
and i want you
but i can't seem to shake these haunting fears...

One More Night:
give me just one last night of peace
before this storm begins
oh just one more night of sleep
one this eve of my world's end

for tomorrow rises a blood red sun
colored by the crimson of my shame
for i have been unfaithful to my most faithful of friends
and betrayed my one true love again

give me just one last night of peace
before this storm begins
oh just one more night of sleep
one this eve of my world's end

with tomorrow i'll be gone to pay for my crimes
walk that lonesome road alone
but tonight all i ask is the shelter of your arms
as these demons, they are catching at my soul

give me just one last night of peace
before this storm begins
oh just one more night of sleep
one this eve of my world's end

I'd love some lyric criticism if you have anything to say. I'm all about improving what I do, so if you have any suggestions musically, vocally, lyrically, whatever, please share them.

ticohans · Unread post by **ticohans** » Tue Mar 25, 2003 1:21 pm

Anyone else? I know there were a couple more who tried but couldn't listen at first because I botched the links...

Again, here's the link: http://www.davidson.edu/personal/halarson/home.htm

... just in case you missed it in my signature

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Tue Mar 25, 2003 2:48 pm

Hey tico

I thought last resorts kicked some ass, you've got some serious skills brotha! I haven't listened to the rest yet, well not properly cause I finally got my hands on 2003-03-19....priorities..im sure you understand!

Awesome voice man!

HiFiKing · Unread post by **HiFiKing** » Tue Mar 25, 2003 3:21 pm

Dude, I have one word... Breathtaking.

I've said it before, and I'll say it again... you have an amazing voice and great songwriting abilities, you should be in all our CD players soon...

[Cheers!]

[HiFi!]

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