Was bored..."Elderly Woman..." by Pearl Jam

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Was bored..."Elderly Woman..." by Pearl Jam

Unread post by oopapercutoo » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:08 pm

My roommates weren't home when I got home so I figured I'd do something real quick....I didn't play through the entire song because I got a semi-important phonecall in the middle of the song.

Don't be too harsh :wink:

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Unread post by oopapercutoo » Sun Feb 20, 2005 7:00 pm

**disreguard this post**

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Feb 20, 2005 9:19 pm

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Sun Feb 20, 2005 11:40 pm

I’m tiered of telling people all you have to do is highlight it, copy it, and paste it in a new browser.
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Unread post by mangold » Mon Feb 21, 2005 11:08 am

eliot1171 wrote:I’m tiered of telling people all you have to do is highlight it, copy it, and paste it in a new browser.
i tried that, still no good
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Unread post by borocks » Mon Feb 21, 2005 12:01 pm

Guitar work seems solid. voice should be more discernable though.

I know you may not have the equipment to record it a bit more professinally. that doesn't matter. But at least make sure it's decent work you post. People will be more inclined to check your stuff.
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Unread post by MWR » Mon Feb 21, 2005 5:00 pm

The rhythm for the most part is nice and solid.

You kinda sound like Elvis. That's not really a bad thing but your vibrato is sort of goat-like. You have a lot of things going wrong with the vocals but there's some good potential there. Keep at it.

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Unread post by oopapercutoo » Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:54 pm

i agree that my vocals are terrible. are there any kind of exercises that would help me to sing better? i have never been able to grasp the concept of singing from my diaphragm at all.

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