ORIGINAL: 1st mix "Mona Lisa"

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ORIGINAL: 1st mix "Mona Lisa"

Unread post by Jc » Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:49 pm

Ok, I fell in love with a woman named Mona... So I had to write a sentimental song about it. I tried to incorporate a little classical element to it going off the idea of the time period the original "Mona Lisa" painting was made. Working with metaphors is tough, lol.

This is the 1st mix of it I've put up. The background vocals are too low, and there is a tambourine missing out of the mix, other than that it's pretty much set in structure. Thanks Chuck for letting me use your fender strat for the little lead riff :D

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 90389&q=Hi
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Unread post by Leibundgut17 » Sat Feb 12, 2005 6:58 pm

Pretty good song man, keep kickin it....I liked that little riff u had in there.
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Unread post by Jc » Sun Feb 13, 2005 7:10 pm

Thanks man, any suggestions?
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