Some new originals...

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oldman
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Some new originals...

Unread post by oldman » Thu Jan 27, 2005 11:48 pm

Hey everyone...its been awhile since i've been on here. Listened to some pretty great stuff by Tom C. tonight....good stuff. Thought I'd post some of my latest.

http://www.jaybarr.net/music/openyoureyes.mp3

http://www.jaybarr.net/music/wouldyouchoose.mp3
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Unread post by jmasta » Fri Jan 28, 2005 12:14 am

I enjoyed it, it reminded me of dispatch/braddigan.

well done, keep up the good work
honey, honey, come and dance with me
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Unread post by MWR » Fri Jan 28, 2005 2:33 am

I like Open Your Eyes a lot.
Both songs are really similar though. They're four bar turnarounds in 4/4 with virtually the same strumming pattern so try mixing up the rhythm more.
Nice work. Keep posting.
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