New recording, first time with harmonica

Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:56 pm

I was gonna do the the harmonica at the same time wiht the vocal and guitar, but i figure, i am not playing live. This is just a very simple song. Very simple.

i am sorry. I was just recovering from a bad cold. You hear me straining on some notes.

critique? thanks
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Away we are

Circles that walk over me
To the top of the curve
or to the bottom of the chain
this circle i am in between

When troubles surround you
trap with no way out
but every circle can be broken
I will run out of here

Let her run with me
to the end the trap we're in
Why live with no way out
Disruption of the happy days

The end is not near
If we can escape
and let our love runs free
we'll see the light
and the happy days start again

When I stop to see
the world i gamble with
the lies i am rambling with
I stop caring in this trap iam in

Waiting for her
and her obligations to forget
There is no limit
we are out of here

away we are
away

filmdude100cms · Unread post by **filmdude100cms** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 8:33 pm

guitar was good, i think the harmonica woulda been better had it not been so loud. and the vocals left something to be desired. good job though man

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:28 pm

filmdude100cms wrote:guitar was good, i think the harmonica woulda been better had it not been so loud. and the vocals left something to be desired. good job though man

MWR · Unread post by **MWR** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:30 pm

gumbomadness wrote:
filmdude100cms wrote:guitar was good, i think the harmonica woulda been better had it not been so loud. and the vocals left something to be desired. good job though man

Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:32 pm

gotcha, i'll reduce the volume on the harp. Thanks.

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:43 pm

yeah that harmonica is tearin through like a mamba jamba, guitar was good, vocals need work. pretty well written tho. keep postin man

JamesMatthews · Unread post by **JamesMatthews** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:53 pm

Nice job, but like the others say... Harmonica isn't your instrument and vocals need some blowjob, Pretty song though.

James

filmdude100cms · Unread post by **filmdude100cms** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 10:02 pm

JamesMatthews wrote:Nice job, but like the others say... Harmonica isn't your instrument and vocals need some blowjob, Pretty song though.

James

is this some canada voice technique?

Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 10:27 pm

filmdude100cms wrote:
JamesMatthews wrote:Nice job, but like the others say... Harmonica isn't your instrument and vocals need some blowjob, Pretty song though.

James
is this some canada voice technique?

maybe mexican

JamesMatthews · Unread post by **JamesMatthews** » Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:30 pm

hehe funny

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