Original with vocal - another free day

[Tranman66]

I have no hw today so i figure i would record something. This is called "the Night" , i posted the instrumental a while ago. this is with vocal. comment.. please. thank you.

i am still working on my voice... the only part i put effects into my voice is the chorus.

http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=316L ... A97LDNV1A1

The Night

Only far away but nothing's in between
I am under nothing but a cover of you
Come under the night of clouds
Only you appear clear in this darkness

Chorus:
so tonight, this night of mine
just make it the best of time
and let's roll the night
to the summit of our days

Share our times together again
Have we ever gotten a better night
than this night that makes wonders
Lets we look at ourselves

You can wander some nights
Shadows would look at you with envy
Not this night of embrace
With our arms of lovers

Chorus:
so tonight this night of mine
just make it the best of time
and lets roll the night
to the summit of our days

This night no one has
speak mendaciously
again and again
this night
stay...
lasts it forever..
stay...

[deceptivehero]

It's pretty cool but your vocals need alot of work.