My "Collide" Cover

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My "Collide" Cover

Unread post by whatshername » Mon Dec 27, 2004 12:16 am

So I did this last week but couldn't find a host. Luckily Ryan hooked me up (thanks dude :D). I did it in one take of each track...I'm not that happy with the way the vocals came out, but then again I never am...haha..so yeah, give it a listen.

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http://technicalitycentral.com/Collide% ... ey%202.mp3

So i just gave it another listen and turns out the guitar track came in pretty crappy too. I need to re-do this.
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Unread post by JacknCoke » Mon Dec 27, 2004 1:53 am

that was pretty good...the guitar was pretty good, especially the bridge.....i think thats where you vocals were best....work on the vocals just a bit more, especially during the chorus...other then that, nice cover:)
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Dec 27, 2004 9:19 am

i thought it was great. if you can hold a beat and sing along, then the rest can be worked on. your voice was great and no one's ever happy with their own vocals :) you have a better range than you're allowing yourself though. you should open up a little, sing louder. i think you should maybe capo it up, sing it another half step or step higher and get loud w/ it. you have a great voice.

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 10:11 am

nice voice. good cover. well done.

add: very enjoyable to listen to
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Unread post by onid41 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 1:57 pm

hey whit great job! i love your voice and the guitar was great...it definately was very enjoyable so keep posting some of your stuff :D
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Unread post by deceptivehero » Mon Dec 27, 2004 2:43 pm

This was excellent, I really enjoyed your voice.
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Unread post by jaroben » Mon Dec 27, 2004 4:04 pm

nice job. there is absolutely nothing wrong with your voice. but man oh man did the guitar suck ass.... haha just kidding. i enjoyed the whole damn thing, very nice.
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Unread post by whatshername » Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:19 pm

Appsoldier wrote:i thought it was great. if you can hold a beat and sing along, then the rest can be worked on. your voice was great and no one's ever happy with their own vocals :) you have a better range than you're allowing yourself though. you should open up a little, sing louder. i think you should maybe capo it up, sing it another half step or step higher and get loud w/ it. you have a great voice.
yeah i always feel like i am holding back because i don't want to get scratch in the recording...my microphone absolutely sucks and if i let myself go i get a lot of static. especially with words that have f's in them. i can't really explain it..i have tried muffling the mic but then you can barely here me. i have to go out and buy a decent mic...anyone have any recommendations?

and thank you everyone for your comments, i appreciate them :D
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Unread post by jeffro » Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:52 pm

Great job! Sounded great, but I've never heard the original version (Damien Rice right?) so I can't really compare. Your voice was wonderful, keep up the good work.

And have you tried singing a bit farther away from the mic to get rid of that static you were talking about?

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Unread post by onid41 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 6:21 pm

its howie day by the way
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Unread post by whatshername » Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:45 pm

jeffro wrote:Great job! Sounded great, but I've never heard the original version (Damien Rice right?) so I can't really compare. Your voice was wonderful, keep up the good work.

And have you tried singing a bit farther away from the mic to get rid of that static you were talking about?
Yeah but then you can barely hear me and the quality is crap. I think the only solution to this problem is getting a decent quality mic.
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Unread post by onid41 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:57 pm

I hear the guitar good and i can hear your voice fine...i don't see anything wrong with the recording

edit: i really enjoy listening to this :D
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Mon Dec 27, 2004 10:33 pm

i thought you sound better than the woman from damien rice
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Unread post by Appfro » Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:03 am

onid41 wrote:I hear the guitar good and i can hear your voice fine...i don't see anything wrong with the recording

edit: i really enjoy listening to this :D
yea, you can definetly hear her fine. volume wasn't an issue. it's her letting her voice go, that's the only issue.

can't give you any advice on a mic, i'm still using a piece of crap myself. so good luck w/ that :)

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Unread post by whatshername » Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:22 am

Appsoldier wrote:
onid41 wrote:I hear the guitar good and i can hear your voice fine...i don't see anything wrong with the recording

edit: i really enjoy listening to this :D
yea, you can definetly hear her fine. volume wasn't an issue. it's her letting her voice go, that's the only issue.

can't give you any advice on a mic, i'm still using a piece of crap myself. so good luck w/ that :)
exactly..and the thing that sucks is that i can feel it when i actually am singing but i can't really do anything about it if i want a good recording! i'm gonna do some research on mics. :evil:
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