Sloppy Jam

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 11:41 am

http://s16.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0FW7 ... XQ0UEBV78X

I recorded this last night at 2 in the morning..on my 130 dollar acoustic. I wanted to record it on my electric which is WAAY better.. but i was too lazy.
Here ya go.
Its sloppy at times and theres one or two hideously wrong notes in there...
The buzzing in the back is horrible.. but i figured out a way to record and not get that sound. My next post in this forum will be higher quality/not rushed/and much better..
I was just wondering..
is my improv boring? like.. too repetative?

i like tictacs · Unread post by **i like tictacs** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 11:46 am

Work on flow

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 11:48 am

i like tictacs wrote:Work on flow

i agree. sometimes its like it just stops and then i do another riff. ya..
i might try to record this again with my electric...

i like tictacs · Unread post by **i like tictacs** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 11:57 am

try to make it more structured. and in one key...etc, it sounds like you are just all over the place.

try like,

intro
part 1
part 2
part 1
part 2
part 3
outro

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 12:01 pm

I like your way of being structured. Im gonna use that when i redo this. Except.. i believe it IS all in the key of E..
and ya..
it is all over the place.
but for playing for only a year and 4 months.. its not bad right?

i like tictacs · Unread post by **i like tictacs** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 12:07 pm

I don't think length of time is important past like 4-6 months, because people progress at different rates

just to start, try to do it in ABA form -

part A
part B (may want to change time sig, key sig)
part A (back to original time/key)

see: sugar will, you never know, rapunzel, etc all have that structure.

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 12:26 pm

i like tictacs wrote:I don't think length of time is important past like 4-6 months, because people progress at different rates

just to start, try to do it in ABA form -

part A
part B (may want to change time sig, key sig)
part A (back to original time/key)

see: sugar will, you never know, rapunzel, etc all have that structure.

excellent.. i hope other people come here and critique!

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:24 pm

gumbomadness wrote:
i like tictacs wrote:I don't think length of time is important past like 4-6 months, because people progress at different rates

just to start, try to do it in ABA form -

part A
part B (may want to change time sig, key sig)
part A (back to original time/key)

see: sugar will, you never know, rapunzel, etc all have that structure.
excellent.. i hope other people come here and critique!

i like tictacs · Unread post by **i like tictacs** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 7:32 pm

it's been a couple hours on possibly one of the slowest days of the year

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 8:30 pm

it beez true. christmas eve.. what kind of loser stays on dmbtabs?

me.

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Sun Dec 26, 2004 6:07 pm

soodly bop

Tranman66 · Unread post by **Tranman66** » Sun Dec 26, 2004 6:31 pm

cool man, now write a song and make a better recording. i like your style, now work that through an organized and plan out song.

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Sun Dec 26, 2004 7:18 pm

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!MORERESPONSES!

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