An Original - It's Alright To Be Afraid

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Too Step
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An Original - It's Alright To Be Afraid

Unread post by Too Step » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:47 pm

I just finished this, after some criticism...

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Chris
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:48 pm

Why am i being reminded of a DMB song? pretty good tho. are you gonna make this instrumental? no vocal?
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Unread post by Too Step » Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:19 am

Thanks, Which DM song does it remind you of?

I'm gonna keep it with vocals i think i can't write instrumentals.

Thanks for the feedback

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Unread post by deceptivehero » Fri Dec 03, 2004 1:29 pm

I thought it was good but it didn't really make me think of a Dave song, which is a good or bad thing depending upon what you wanted.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:59 pm

omg, i listened to it again, i swear its not the same. What the heck did i listen to last time. Anyway, this one def doesn't sound like a dave song. My apology.

Your voice is high. Do you like singing voice high? Probably sound better high in your opinion right? Well, I think you'll get more range by going a little lower.

I like to see the song gets a little faster.

Slow and steady. Wellplayed tho.

Keep posting!
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Unread post by mangold » Fri Dec 03, 2004 4:02 pm

na bad ma man... na bad. your voice is good but very high. i would turn up the intrumental tho. keep posting
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Unread post by Too Step » Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:19 pm

Thanks folks, i really didn't realise i was singing that high until i just listened back :?

Thanks i appreciate the feedback :)
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