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Hey everyone Recently is now UP!!!

Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 6:53 pm

hi guys,

I just posted my version of dave's Recently.
Give me a critique please.
all the other tunes are originals
AND CHECK OUT ONE NIGHT!!!!

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 31&alid=-1

Cheers,
J.T.

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Unread post by nancies21 » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:05 pm

guitar sounds great...can't do it any better myself! vocals could prolly get a little better...but damn good

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:12 pm

yeah that was from like 3-4 months ago and in my opinion i've made progress vocally since then.
But i basically posted it for DMBJASON b/c he said he wanted to hear me play a cover.

There ya go, guitar pretty good vocals need work but when don't they on covers. Its just so hard to sing other ppl's music as opposed to ORIGINALS.

Thanks for the quick response nancies21 and by the way just got done listening to BOWA good job yourself!!! Guitar was great and the vocals were good too but could use work towards the end but when can't they.

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J.T.

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:15 pm

the guitar is good(I could do better), but the vocals...man, I don't know where the fuck you got off telling me anything about singing dave songs..It's like you have no variation in pitch, it just stays the same...but hey, it was ok overall, but seriously...

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:20 pm

thanks for the review
I know the vocals aren't good but i just post to show u others can do just as good as u.

As far as your vocals go i am just being honest and tell u what i think is off and i'm glad u said something b/c i knew the vocals were off.

Good debating with u man, its been enjoyable.

CHeers,
J.T.

PLease give the originals a try!

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:22 pm

I never said nobody could do as good as me...unless I was fuckin joking...but anyway, you can play the guitar, and have good rhythm...but honestly, your vocals...come on...where do you get off?

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:32 pm

murky waters....

Well it sounds as good as like...Crickets, Ticos, Fire's, etc...maybe a little different, but just as good as....it's good...

man isn't it a lot easier to sing your "own" songs?

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:40 pm

"man isn't it a lot easier to sing your "own" songs?"

What do u mean DmbFanJason???

Check out ONE NIGHT!!![/quote]

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:43 pm

you sound a lot better on your originals than you do when you play dave...that's what I meant...it's easier isnt it?

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:54 pm

Oh yeah man its like u get to choose where u want things.
ITS GREAT.Sometimes its a tough decision tho plus things take time to develop.

I'm going to take down Recently and put up my original version of Undone by Weezer. I reworked all the guitar to be completely different it should be up soon!

Cheers,
J.T.

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sat Mar 01, 2003 8:46 pm

eclektik_rhythmz wrote:Oh yeah man its like u get to choose where u want things.
ITS GREAT.Sometimes its a tough decision tho plus things take time to develop.

I'm going to take down Recently and put up my original version of Undone by Weezer. I reworked all the guitar to be completely different it should be up soon!

Cheers,
J.T.
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Isn't it good to be better at your own stuff???
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