An Original, Compass

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Too Step
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An Original, Compass

Unread post by Too Step » Sat Oct 16, 2004 7:25 pm

Hi this is my first original that i've finished. I wrote the lyrics about 3 years ago and it all just came together.

http://windows.mouselike.org/windows.mo ... ompass.mp3

I'm after some tips as i've never been good at writing melodies.

Chris
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Unread post by Jc » Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:50 pm

You've got a great sound for Jazz music, I can see your music fitting in GREAT at coffee shops. :idea:
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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Sat Oct 16, 2004 11:46 pm

very soothing. makes my ears all happy and relaxed


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