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Recording youve all been wanting to hear!

Unread post by Pickles » Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:28 pm

awesome!

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some of its a little sloppy. the first part my friend wrote, and hes much better at picking than me. the 2nd part he wrote until the high part, which i screwed up a little bit on. the high part on i wrote.
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:52 pm

not bad. only thing id do was make it longer, but i know its still a work in progress.

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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:53 pm

I could barely hear it. volume was way low.
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Unread post by onid41 » Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:57 pm

i cant get it to work
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:07 pm

The FX you added make it a little tough to hear. Sometimes I can't tell if a part is out of tune or if it's the FX. Also, there seems to be a high note that's played through most of the song; I think it gets a little bit annoying. Maybe incorporate more bass.

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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:17 pm

he didnt use effects, his mic just isnt great.

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Unread post by Brock » Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:17 pm

I think he recorded this through a pair of headphones because he doesn't have a microphone.
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Unread post by i-am-me » Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:38 pm

there was a chord or two that sounded really off. but other than that. i really liked it a lot. sounded very good.
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Unread post by allfalldown » Mon Oct 04, 2004 12:02 am

I like it - and I don't think any of the chords were off, it just sounded like there was one string a little out of tune. Good job..

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Unread post by Pickles » Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:16 am

i recorded this through a pair of headphones that you put into your ears. it wasnt loud enough when i recorded it though. they were placed inside the soundhole. then i had to increase the volume by like 30 db.

as for the effects, i dont know exactly why you thought there were effects.. but oh well.

the string that sounds bad was actually meant for electric guitars. i broke a string and needed a replacement, and my friend had an extra electric string, so i said ok. that one comes out of tune a lot and just sounds bad in general.
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Unread post by brandtmarc » Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:18 am

I love it, add some lyrics to it and you have a new Crash Into Me.... I think its great!!
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Unread post by Pickles » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:22 pm

so many views, yet so many reviews..
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Unread post by CBalvarez » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:30 pm

the riff just isnt smooth enough, you need to polish it up and tune your guitar, pretty good start tho
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Unread post by Pickles » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:53 pm

CBalvarez wrote:the riff just isnt smooth enough, you need to polish it up and tune your guitar, pretty good start tho
yeah, the G wont stay in tune. i need to get a replacement, but until then its the best i can do.
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Unread post by fatjack » Mon Oct 04, 2004 7:00 pm

it was cool until you stopped fingerpicking
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