Satellite Cover..

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Satellite Cover..

Unread post by Boyd » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:20 am

It's late and I'm tired so yea... I had trouble goin from Verse to chorus, I can't sing well, and other stuff... I don't post my recordings much so what the hell. Any feedback is appreciated, except negative, but do it anyways... http://www.angelfire.com/clone2/nate667/ Oh damn, I spelled satellite wrong...I'm gonna go sleep now.
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Unread post by onid41 » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:54 am

yea the verse to chorus part needs some cleaning up, a little fixing here and there and your good, i think you should sing it like you mean it but other than that its not that bad
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Unread post by Boyd » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:35 am

I know, it's hard for me to sing like I mean it when I'm almost asleep though, I'll try and redo it sometime when I get it down better.
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Unread post by kcw » Sun Oct 03, 2004 4:32 pm

I think the whole chorus needs work.

Other than that its fairly good. Better than I can do on that song.
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Unread post by i like tictacs » Sun Oct 03, 2004 5:16 pm

The vocals need work and the timing was a little off at times. I think that your microphone is screwing the recording, I guarantee if you got a good one it would sound like 800x better. But hell you sing better then me so who am I kidding. With a little work you got some good stuff.
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