1st Studio Recording!

AdamCU81 · Unread post by **AdamCU81** » Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:02 pm

Well, after several months of tweaking, I have a song I'm willing to post here for critique. This recording seems to be in a constant state of improvement, so any suggestions will be taken seriously. I want this to be demo quality when it's done. Anyways, here's the link:

http://www.avalancheartists.com/EWM!.mp3

Please let me know what you think is good and bad. Domo Arigato Mr. Robato!

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Tue Sep 28, 2004 7:34 pm

its impressive and you have a good voice, but im not sure that i like teh song, not my style, good recording too.

AdamCU81 · Unread post by **AdamCU81** » Wed Sep 29, 2004 2:00 pm

Thanks for the honesty.

HumbleMonkey · Unread post by **HumbleMonkey** » Wed Sep 29, 2004 4:05 pm

thats some funky music :shock:

bngholio14 · Unread post by **bngholio14** » Wed Sep 29, 2004 7:11 pm

I dunno if anybody else thinks it but his voice kinda reminds me of the singer for Barenaked Ladies.

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Wed Sep 29, 2004 8:53 pm

bngholio14 wrote:I dunno if anybody else thinks it but his voice kinda reminds me of the singer for Barenaked Ladies.

I love BNL... his voice is similar, but i didnt think of it till u reminded me

Jer1400 · Unread post by **Jer1400** » Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:10 am

The chorus kind of reminds me of 3eB. Hmm... I just think the lyrics could use some work.

AdamCU81 · Unread post by **AdamCU81** » Thu Sep 30, 2004 2:40 am

Interesting mixed comments. Concerning the foundation of the song.....we already recorded this song in our "once-in-a-lifetime-opportunity," so it's doubtful that the basics will change much, but comments about intrument levels, dynamics, and effects will be of help. We're kind of in the mixing process now, although we can still record additional tracks without the studio (which may add background noise). ...just so you understand the situation. Thanks for the comments....whatever they may be....my own thoughts seem to be biased. Thanks again.

CBalvarez · Unread post by **CBalvarez** » Thu Sep 30, 2004 11:09 am

Dont get me wrong here, youre talented, but i think it kind of sounds like circus music, no thats rude, its just not my style

mlb1399 · Unread post by **mlb1399** » Thu Sep 30, 2004 12:15 pm

You have got a really good voice, but something just doesn't sound right. I don't know if the music clashes well with the lyrics/singing. I think the song needs a different vibe, but then again what do I know. Good luck.

HumbleMonkey · Unread post by **HumbleMonkey** » Thu Sep 30, 2004 5:14 pm

i actually liked it a lot more the 2nd time then the first, it reminds of that song 'like humans do'

onid41 · Unread post by **onid41** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:57 am

i think this song is pretty cool

filmdude100cms · Unread post by **filmdude100cms** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 11:24 am

i too dont like the song much, post some more stuff, studio or not.

Locarius · Unread post by **Locarius** » Sat Oct 02, 2004 2:44 pm

I like it... I think the band could tighten up a bit though.

mgoedman · Unread post by **mgoedman** » Sun Oct 03, 2004 12:31 am

interesting...great voice, very interesting song and instrumentation. the juries still out on this one. though the chorus is tight (bring me to my senses part)

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