*An Original I wrote today.. please critique*

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*An Original I wrote today.. please critique*

Unread post by Soup » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:39 pm

This is my first time recording.. acquired a copy of cool edit along with a shitty computer mic.. but the quality is decent .. anyways im looking for some feedback..good and bad , thanks :D

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/soupstunes/holdmeup.mp3
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:40 pm

the link dont work!
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Unread post by jsgksu » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:43 pm

please, do not make two threads about the same thing
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Unread post by Soup » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:48 pm

about the double posting sorry about that .. im new to the board.. my apologies..idin't realize it did that

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Unread post by jsgksu » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:59 pm

Soup wrote:about the double posting sorry about that .. im new to the board.. my apologies..idin't realize it did that
I know you are, I didnt mean to jump on your shit, I assumed it was a mistake but I was just making sure. Welcome to the boards, stick around and maybe tomorrow when Im not at home on dialup Ill listen to your recording
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Unread post by Swe dmbfan » Thu Jul 29, 2004 8:13 pm

ok!
good work!

i think you voice would sound better if you try to sing a little darker!

the start of the song sound like crach in to me ;)
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