yo yo yo....yall smell good this evening....bla deee, anyway...its a little quiet version...
BTW....tempo is off, singing needs works, theres no emotion whatsoever, etc.
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holy shit, that downloaded in like 2.1 seconds!! so I'm listening to this and typing this in Real time.......sounds good so far..... exquisite tempo
guitar sounds equsitetly in tune. oh went a lil off rhythm but got back on strongly on that D chord. Guitar sound GREAT - very balanced - is it the Taylor?? oooooooh nice slides there. oh bridge time. no that has to be the Martin - bass is strong. pickin' up now near the end, (enter Timmy solo)......ooooo nice variations there. doubled up strumming on the ending bridge part whatever its called. The end. Very very nice job indeed my man.
how do you like the realtime critique?
peace playas,
Ken


how do you like the realtime critique?

peace playas,
Ken
good, and you?
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Jason.....Singing wise I think this is the closest to Dave I've heard you, really sounded good. Very impressive job at the ".....candyman tempting the thoughts of a sweet tooth, blah, blah, blah..." part. Also, The song totally came to life in the closing G, F#, E run.....real nice job on the strumming.
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Pretty good, I really liked it. Keep up the singing, nothing better than learning a song and getting the singing down with it. I really liked the ending too. Maybe i'll start working out my singing soon, personally i think i suck after recording and hearing myself. Anyway keep up the good work. Peace.
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