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trippinants13 · Unread post by **trippinants13** » Sat Jun 19, 2004 5:57 pm

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/trippinants13

If you listened to this already, listen again. I made some mixing changes that should have been done in the first place. Please critique.

dmb_tatertot · Unread post by **dmb_tatertot** » Sun Jun 20, 2004 5:27 pm

not bad at all... seemed like the tempo fluctuated a little and kinda threw off the rhythm but overall it wasnt bad. The vocals could definately use some work, but nice job.

good luck

Macht · Unread post by **Macht** » Sun Jun 20, 2004 5:33 pm

very nice job, but yeah, the timing is just a bit off in some parts.

rand · Unread post by **rand** » Tue Jun 22, 2004 10:39 pm

Were you trying to sound like Gilmour for the first half of the song? Cuz you have to smoke like a chimney to get to that level

If not, well...cool.

Anyway, I liked the voice either way. You started off very well, but you strayed off key a bit later on here and there. And overall, the guitar is almost right on - there are just a few parts in the intro that are off like the other guys said. Nice cover though!

BlueWaters · Unread post by **BlueWaters** » Wed Jun 23, 2004 2:09 am

Nice job...I really liked the beginning with the soloing and all that, very soothing. I actually would have liked to hear just an instrumental if you got more creative with the lead guitar.

I think the strumming became a little heavy during the song though on the chord transitions, even vocally at some points. I would say that that's the biggest thing i think could use work. Good job though.

*On that smoker comment, I have to clear my throat too before songs, but i try to turn away and cover my mouth. That does account for my poor breathing skills though for those commenting on my vocals.*

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