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by k-nasty » Tue May 11, 2004 10:13 pm
One Sweet World
I cant tell if my voice is on cue or not, in some parts it sounds like it, but others i cant tell....lemme kno!

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by 2StepGranny » Wed May 12, 2004 2:13 am
Hey, I thought you did very well! The only constructive critizism I have on the singing is for the "Lay down in our mother's arms" part, your just a tad off on the timing. But another than that you did very well. You voice fits the song quite well actually, and the guitar playing was right on! Well done!

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by k-nasty » Wed May 12, 2004 9:27 pm
thanks man, i didnt even notice my timing was off!
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by 2StepGranny » Wed May 12, 2004 10:26 pm
k-nasty wrote:thanks man, i didnt even notice my timing was off!
No problem man... you never really notice until someone says something and then you go back and listen to it again. Just glad to help you out

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i like tictacs
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by i like tictacs » Thu May 13, 2004 6:55 pm
Holy shit, I started listening, and I seriously thought that it was Dave playing, then you kept singing, I was like, what the? Oh yeah, it's that guys cover.
Fucking good cover, bro. Only suggestion is to pick up the tempo on the intro a little. It seemed slow.
sooo good...
sup d00d
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by k-nasty » Sat May 15, 2004 11:54 am
haha thanks man, yea i play lover lay down a little slower than normal too, my brains off or something....i'll try and fix it, but thanks
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by i-am-me » Sat May 15, 2004 7:40 pm
good cover, nicely done. but yea, that one part is al ittle off.
and in the verse riff thing, try to hit those mutes more, it really adds a lot.
great job, keep it up.
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