busted out the electric tonight!!

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busted out the electric tonight!!

Unread post by Matty Boom » Wed Apr 21, 2004 8:49 pm

i got the itch tonight so i laid down watchtower on the acoustic and then had some fun playing lead on the electric for it

first solo i've played in a while so i was a bit rusty, but i still got into it

here ya go...

http://www.angelfire.com/mech/mattyboom ... erlead.mp3
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:02 pm

haha, that bad huh?

haha, I WAS RUSTY...GIVE ME A BREAK

lol
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:06 pm

Heh, wasn't bad.. nice job matty.. the other day i played bass for a bunch of my friends.. just to clairify, i don't play bass.. we played watchtower and they were like"Play the intro solo like stefan" and i just threw some shit together that sounded decent..lol good job, keep up the work
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:11 pm

Lemme improve on that.. the vocals need work and the soloing seemed too much at some points.. good though..
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:13 pm

yea i did the vocals/rhythm in one shot just so i could lay the lead over it so i didn't put much effort into that part

and the lead was two takes so i was trying to pick and choose through too much on the fly i suppose
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Unread post by Speenis » Wed Apr 21, 2004 10:52 pm

I really liked it Matty. I thought the lead was a bit much at points, mainly the beginning. If you would have cut a few secs off I think it would be alot better. The vocals weren't too shabby. Still need some work though, not that I can talk, but, ya know :lol: . Good job overall!
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Thu Apr 22, 2004 12:05 pm

love it.... keep up the good work
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Unread post by rlightrouge » Sat Apr 24, 2004 6:51 am

what the hell was that.......you suck

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sat Apr 24, 2004 3:55 pm

rlightrouge wrote:what the hell was that.......you suck
and you're gay.
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Unread post by chosta » Sat Apr 24, 2004 4:37 pm

rlightrouge wrote:what the hell was that.......you suck
why dont you post something?

oh, thats right, your a no-talent piece of shit.

i bet you'll get really far in life. - by that i mean, when you're done being angry about your small penis, i hope you end up on the 30 year plan as a janitor at a shitty mall. if you don't post ever again, no one will be offended, or even take notice.

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Unread post by whatshername » Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:19 pm

rlightrouge wrote:what the hell was that.......you suck
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sat Apr 24, 2004 9:32 pm

I found my reply alright..
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Unread post by Pickles » Sat Apr 24, 2004 9:44 pm

hey matty, nice job. only got a couple things to say about it.

sometimes your lead parts seemed a bit repetitive. just an observation.

vocals were better than i could do, but could still use some work. you can at least make it work heh, as opposed to me who wouldnt be able to sing if i practiced for months.

i play the rhythm a little different than you... i hold out the F longer. just food for thought. i think dave does it too, unless you were makin it your own. but then again thats what you did through a lot of the song. :)

overall, nice job.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sat Apr 24, 2004 11:48 pm

rlightrouge wrote:what the hell was that.......you suck
hey thanks for being blunt with me, i do appreciate that

but like i said, i hadn't played lead in a while so i guess it was perdy bad huh

and shane...i run out of ideas quick these days when i just pick up the electric once a month or so :)
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