New Original - "One Day"

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New Original - "One Day"

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:38 pm

So, I don't know what came over me, but I wrote this whole thing yesterday. I don't know where it came from, as I've never written anything like this before. (I know, I say that everytime) Its extremely rough, but I mean, I wrote it yesterday, and I'm not sure on all the parts. You can get the general idea though.

But yeah, here it is -

http://www.patmcinnis.com/onedayrough.mp3
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Unread post by rampaged.congt » Tue Apr 13, 2004 6:42 pm

I like it a lot...nice little song..
I especially like when it starts off again at around 1:14 and 2:25
Reminded of 'neon' by John Mayer...

I'll be listening to that again.. :) - good work
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Wed Apr 14, 2004 7:06 pm

thanks man!

i actually changed one of the parts, so the final thing will be a bit different. :)
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