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Unread post by dpresti » Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:38 pm

Only my 2nd recording..

let me know what you think.


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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:59 pm

I thought it was good. Guitar sounded pretty good. You're definitely missing a C chord in the verse there(check the tab for that)...and the G chord strumming in the last part of the verse is off as well(not sure if you were doing that on purpose though). Vocals had good tone to them IMO and you were in key; could be stronger though. It will take some more practice, but you definitely got something goin.

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Unread post by gravesRR7 » Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:26 pm

i thought it was good too. the main critique i have is the outro. i think that was a bit off.

some of the timing was a bit off, i think maybe trying recording the guitar and vocals seperate might help it, that way you could just concentrate on singing.

other than that it was pretty good, keep 'em coming
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Unread post by dpresti » Sun Apr 11, 2004 9:30 pm

thank you


yeah i did this recording in 1 try, plus its only my 2nd recording overall, and i did do the vocals and guitar separate. thanks for the input!

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Apr 11, 2004 10:19 pm

Definetly missing the C chord.. do it again with the correct tab and it'll sound 10x better
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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:42 am

i agree. the C will make all the difference. The song sounds naked as is.
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