Only my 2nd recording..
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I thought it was good. Guitar sounded pretty good. You're definitely missing a C chord in the verse there(check the tab for that)...and the G chord strumming in the last part of the verse is off as well(not sure if you were doing that on purpose though). Vocals had good tone to them IMO and you were in key; could be stronger though. It will take some more practice, but you definitely got something goin.
i thought it was good too. the main critique i have is the outro. i think that was a bit off.
some of the timing was a bit off, i think maybe trying recording the guitar and vocals seperate might help it, that way you could just concentrate on singing.
other than that it was pretty good, keep 'em coming
some of the timing was a bit off, i think maybe trying recording the guitar and vocals seperate might help it, that way you could just concentrate on singing.
other than that it was pretty good, keep 'em coming
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