finally....a SMTS that works!!

[i-am-me]

after i finished it, i'm not exactly sure why the fuck i'm posting it. its just really fun to play to, but you are going to want to shoot yourself (well you might want to shoot me) when you hear me attempt to sing "open up my head and let me out, little baby." haha. shaky parts, and i fuck up a couple, but i wasn't ognna go and redo this junk. one take is all i need. lol.

so one take, one track, and remember!!

HELP WITH MY VOICE. that's really what i care about. anything you wnna say about the guitar work is fine, but really criticize the vocals.

thanks.

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/m_sassouni ... to_say.mp3

EDIT!!!! go to 1:55 in the recording. my bad.....

[DMBFan63]

From what i hear so far, you're voice isn't that bad.. guitar is pretty solid.. the you're straining your voice to hit those high notes.. just sing them at a lower pitch and gradually work your way to the point where you can hit them.. straining your voice will damage it and you'll probably be hurting when you sing if you don't do it did you use the same track for the 2nd verse as you did the first or something? cause it just goes silent then you play the riff a few times and then start singing again.. overall, it sounds pretty good.. just keep practicing and try not to strain

[i-am-me]

ah shit.....i knew i shoul have listened to this before i posted it. lol.

the beginning is from a recording i did yesterday (i just left nero on) and i guess it was recording in the middle of the track. so the take i did today is the second part.

[Jc]

I can't hear much of anything, record it again and PUMP UP THE VOLUME ON THE RECORDING!