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Newbie, first recording inside - typical situation

Unread post by dpresti » Thu Apr 08, 2004 4:05 pm

let me know what u guys think

thanks..

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its up now!
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Unread post by gravesRR7 » Thu Apr 08, 2004 5:07 pm

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Unread post by dpresti » Thu Apr 08, 2004 5:14 pm

click on downloads!!!


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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Fri Apr 09, 2004 3:23 am

not too shabby... good work
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Fri Apr 09, 2004 8:34 am

Voice and rythm guitar was good, but the lead guitar was quite off in places. Particularly the rythym of the leads and a lot of the notes were out of the key of the song. In my opinion the song would be much better without the lead track. Also, try to supress the urge to sing like Dave.
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