#41 Cover, take a look see.

MaveDatthews · Unread post by **MaveDatthews** » Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:12 am

here yar. Critique pls.
http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/mavedatthews

Thnx

DT · Unread post by DT » Wed Apr 07, 2004 2:49 am

intro is a little sloppy, a lot of buzzing but still ok, no missed or extra notes... i like your voice, its clear and higher-pitched but not too high. nice range on the high note, i always cringe before hearing people try that but yours was clean. my only suggestion would be to use a little more tact with the guitar on this one if that makes any sense. maybe im the only one that thinks this, but a lot of people play it in a very driving way and i always liked it better when it had a smoother, less "slappy" feel to it. Just personal preference though i guess, i think it sounds better that way. Great job overall, you have a great voice and solid guitar work.

i-am-me · Unread post by **i-am-me** » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:08 am

nice cover. i agree, the intro was sloppy. just practiceit more. push downharder....blah blah.

and about the yelling, i was dissapointed at the beginning when you ducked out of the first yell. then the second one, i cringed (just as dreaming tree said) but then i heard you nail it and i was so happy. i love when people hit the yell (cause i can't.) lol. very nice.

MaveDatthews · Unread post by **MaveDatthews** » Wed Apr 07, 2004 10:09 am

whipped it up quick after i heard someone do a 41 cover last night. i should re do. i know ive done that song way better. Thnx guys.

The Dreaming Tree wrote:i always cringe before hearing people try that.

amen to that dreaming tree

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Wed Apr 07, 2004 6:15 pm

Sounds good man.

Guitar was quite sloppy though and you went in and out of key quite a few times in the first verse.

Maybe work on your breathe control a bit too so that you can hit those higher parts...' i wanted to stay....i wanted to...'
Also it seems like you try to sound like dave a bit too much, sing in your own voice. You've got a good voice, use it.

Overall it was a good cover.

Reckless · Unread post by **Reckless** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 12:55 am

pretty cool yo. to me, that song is kind of hard. i dont think my voice is that bad but it just doesn't go with that song...yours did though. it kicked ass

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#41 Cover, take a look see.

#41 Cover, take a look see.

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