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41 cover, check it

Unread post by recently36 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 1:16 pm

http://www.purevolume.com/fareast

Click on the pop-up player and press play.

Just give any comments/suggestions you have on my cover.

thanks,
ben
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Unread post by gravesRR7 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:43 pm

i can't get it to work

(edit) i got it.

well, the guitar is pretty solid at most points. i think that you have a bit too much going on near the end. the simplicity of this song is part of what makes it beautiful. but the guitar sound pretty solid.

you've got some lead guitar in there, why not turn it into the melody, or try some vocals along with it
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Unread post by recently36 » Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:52 pm

Thanks for the advice about the end...I should probably stay simple there. In terms of vocals, my singer is recording them soon and I'll try to get them up as soon as possible so its not quite as boring.

thanks anyway,
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