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Unread post by trebor » Mon Mar 22, 2004 7:59 am

hi this is my bowa cover. pls comment :p

quality is not so great but its not that bad.


http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/bowab.mp3

thanks in advance!

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Unread post by CWMCALL » Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:55 am

page removed....

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Unread post by trebor » Mon Mar 22, 2004 11:06 am

why did it do this?

how can i fix it????

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Unread post by trebor » Mon Mar 22, 2004 1:17 pm

heres the new link:, i put it in geocities instead

http://www.geocities.com/cycadophyta02/bowab.mp3

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Unread post by trippinants13 » Mon Mar 22, 2004 1:24 pm

try creating a new angelfire account and upload again.
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Unread post by ElGuitarrista » Mon Mar 22, 2004 3:49 pm

Not bad... the guitar sounded really good. I sensed that the vocals got out of your range at times... for example, at 0:35-0:36. The recording quality itself could be improved... I suspect you're recording through a single mic. Good job though.

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Mar 22, 2004 5:14 pm

Nicely done.. try getting some good recording equipment.. work on the vocals though.. try to get those highs back into your range cause it's a struggle for you to hit them and it makes them sound bad
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Unread post by themaker » Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:22 pm

DMBFan63 wrote:Nicely done.. try getting some good recording equipment.. work on the vocals though.. try to get those highs back into your range cause it's a struggle for you to hit them and it makes them sound bad


try to get those highs back into your range....I'm sorry, how do you do this? :roll:
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:52 pm

you practice a whole lot.
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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Mon Mar 29, 2004 3:46 am

yeah, your highs are a tad bit flat. just practice your scales. Start with a middle c scale (the whole la, la, la ,la thing)....and slowly raise octaves. Just how i learned to increase my vocal range. Im sure that was confusing and i apologize, its late :)

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Unread post by trebor » Mon Mar 29, 2004 9:15 am

hi thanks everyone for the replies...

maybe i should be sining in falsetto for the high parts and not forcing it??? what do you think? or what if i try to make my voice softer so it sounds i can get more pacing on belting out and not just belting out on every line

also when i sing, for some reason i dont feel that im going flat but when i listen to all my recordings, i think i really have a problem with my voice pretty much going flat.

thanks agein

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Mar 29, 2004 2:56 pm

themaker wrote:
DMBFan63 wrote:Nicely done.. try getting some good recording equipment.. work on the vocals though.. try to get those highs back into your range cause it's a struggle for you to hit them and it makes them sound bad


try to get those highs back into your range....I'm sorry, how do you do this? :roll:
what i actually meant, was try not to force the highs and bring them into your actual vocal range and just keep them lower pitched
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