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Unread post by jaroben » Thu Apr 28, 2005 3:53 pm

good cover. guitar was on. nasal voice.. but not bad.

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:41 am

Raif2032 wrote:Wow, good job dude. Do you play out at all? I think you definently should.


"and now it's just another lonely day hey heeey" maybe try a falsetto there? I dunno, something to try.

I think you have a great voice, but maybe i'm just not as smart as the other people on this board...


take constructive critism to make yourself better, and if it isn't constructive tell them to fuck off.

oh yeah, and you're totally better looking than that silverman chick.
girl don't sing falsetto numbnuts

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:43 am

Appfro wrote:yea, it's kind of funny that you guys come here to be assholes when 10 people post/day that suck hard core. it was a good cover, not perfect, but better than 90% of the crap that's posted here.

and i was under the impression that we were here for constructive criticism, not "her voice doesn't waver this much" asshole criticism.

just my 2 cents.
boo hoo, cry me a river.

i don't mind someone saying that they like a person's song, but speen's use of hyprebole seemed a little odd to me.

and no one can benefit from everyone saying "THAT'S AWESOME LOL! YOU SHOULD BE ROCKSTAR."

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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:45 am

fatjack wrote:
Raif2032 wrote:Wow, good job dude. Do you play out at all? I think you definently should.


"and now it's just another lonely day hey heeey" maybe try a falsetto there? I dunno, something to try.

I think you have a great voice, but maybe i'm just not as smart as the other people on this board...


take constructive critism to make yourself better, and if it isn't constructive tell them to fuck off.

oh yeah, and you're totally better looking than that silverman chick.
girl don't sing falsetto numbnuts
yes they do numbnusts. it's just less common in women than men.
I think falsetto is using just the inner folds of the vocal chords - women can sing falsetto apparently but it's rare. We're not usually singing in the falsetto voice - it's the chest or head voice - the same that men use.
http://www.halfbakery.com/idea/Hidden_2 ... or_20Notes

go to google type in "women can't sing falsetto" and find someone who says they can't
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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:47 am

fatjack wrote:
Appfro wrote:yea, it's kind of funny that you guys come here to be assholes when 10 people post/day that suck hard core. it was a good cover, not perfect, but better than 90% of the crap that's posted here.

and i was under the impression that we were here for constructive criticism, not "her voice doesn't waver this much" asshole criticism.

just my 2 cents.
boo hoo, cry me a river.

i don't mind someone saying that they like a person's song, but speen's use of hyprebole seemed a little odd to me.

and no one can benefit from everyone saying "THAT'S AWESOME LOL! YOU SHOULD BE ROCKSTAR."
ok, but when's the last time you've commented on someone's song. shit, even miguel or pat or hell sarah for that matter??? never. you come here to give peopel shit and then you post a 5 min clip of you playing a guitar that w/ as many notes as you can fit into a measure w/ no sense of rhythm whatsoever and never sing cause you can't and then shit on others that try. sure she's not the best. maybe she's not a rockstar. w/ some help, maybe she could be. but you'll always be in your room making songs that sound like ass listening to others play and making fun of them. period.
...and i'm one of the guys that actually likes you

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Apr 29, 2005 8:18 am

Appfro wrote: ok, but when's the last time you've commented on someone's song. shit, even miguel or pat or hell sarah for that matter??? never. you come here to give peopel shit and then you post a 5 min clip of you playing a guitar that w/ as many notes as you can fit into a measure w/ no sense of rhythm whatsoever and never sing cause you can't and then shit on others that try. sure she's not the best. maybe she's not a rockstar. w/ some help, maybe she could be. but you'll always be in your room making songs that sound like ass listening to others play and making fun of them. period.
...and i'm one of the guys that actually likes you
this has nothing to do with what i play man, there was no reason for you to attack me like that :?

and you can continue to think that im being an asshole blah blah... but you don't know that i haven't listened to people's songs. you ever consider that maybe i only post when i have something to critique? there is no point in me posting something that says the same thing as everyone else.

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:53 am

Don't even bother Appfro. I've been down that road and it won't get you anywhere.

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To critique Liz, I think you have a great voice. On this song I think you kind of held back. I'd like to hear a song where you just let go, if you can do that and keep your voice under control, I think you'd be golden.

On Fatass' side, I think that she does need to work on her voice a bit, but who doesn't. Jack I don't think people get pissed on the content of your critiques as much as the way you say them. I mean I could go through the forums and rewrite all your posts with the same content in an inoffensive manner.
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Unread post by Raif2032 » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:00 pm

fatjack wrote:
and you can continue to think that im being an asshole blah blah...
I don't think you needed to tell us that, we could figure that out on our own.


You're right though, nobody benefits from praise. There is no such thing as self esteem or anything like that. Thing is, you weren't the LEAST bit constructive in what you said so that does, in fact, make you an asshole. You seriously just kinda sound jealous or something...

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Unread post by Speenis » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:32 pm

fatjack wrote:
Appfro wrote:yea, it's kind of funny that you guys come here to be assholes when 10 people post/day that suck hard core. it was a good cover, not perfect, but better than 90% of the crap that's posted here.

and i was under the impression that we were here for constructive criticism, not "her voice doesn't waver this much" asshole criticism.

just my 2 cents.
boo hoo, cry me a river.

i don't mind someone saying that they like a person's song, but speen's use of hyprebole seemed a little odd to me.

and no one can benefit from everyone saying "THAT'S AWESOME LOL! YOU SHOULD BE ROCKSTAR."
Thats my opinion. I don't give a fuck what you think, nor did I "critique" your comment, cuz thats just stupid. So why you felt the need to critique a critique is beyond me, especially when the only point of it was to make someone else look bad. Just a little shitty IMO.
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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:39 pm

fatjack wrote:
Appfro wrote: ok, but when's the last time you've commented on someone's song. shit, even miguel or pat or hell sarah for that matter??? never. you come here to give peopel shit and then you post a 5 min clip of you playing a guitar that w/ as many notes as you can fit into a measure w/ no sense of rhythm whatsoever and never sing cause you can't and then shit on others that try. sure she's not the best. maybe she's not a rockstar. w/ some help, maybe she could be. but you'll always be in your room making songs that sound like ass listening to others play and making fun of them. period.
...and i'm one of the guys that actually likes you
this has nothing to do with what i play man, there was no reason for you to attack me like that :?

and you can continue to think that im being an asshole blah blah... but you don't know that i haven't listened to people's songs. you ever consider that maybe i only post when i have something to critique? there is no point in me posting something that says the same thing as everyone else.
you didn't come here to critique her, you came here to attack speen and at the same time put her down. i'm through w/ this conversation, i knew you could be an asshole but most of the time you were right and just defending your point. and this one time you can't see that you were wrong in what you did. well maybe i was wrong about you. maybe you are just an asshole to be an asshole.

and i was drunk and you're right, i had no right to attack your music like that. i appologize. but the rest of my comments stand.

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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:18 pm

what you all are neglecting to realize is that i never said she sucked, not once. i think she has a very good voice and can play guitar quite well. i just gave one minor critique.

and perhaps i was a little off base with the way i replied to speen. i read his response and a big question mark went over my head and i reacted a little too quickly i suppose. i apologize to speen, but my critique still stands; if you wish to interpret it as me just attacking her, thats your problem, not mine.

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Unread post by Speenis » Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:22 pm

fatjack wrote:what you all are neglecting to realize is that i never said she sucked, not once. i think she has a very good voice and can play guitar quite well. i just gave one minor critique.

and perhaps i was a little off base with the way i replied to speen. i read his response and a big question mark went over my head and i reacted a little too quickly i suppose. i apologize to speen, but my critique still stands; if you wish to interpret it as me just attacking her, thats your problem, not mine.
Apology accepted. :thumbsup:
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Unread post by Easy E » Sat Apr 30, 2005 7:33 pm

i think you guys both suck
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun May 01, 2005 1:12 pm

eze3484 wrote:i think you guys both suck
i think the guy in your picture sucks

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Unread post by chosta » Sun May 01, 2005 11:02 pm

iha wrote:dave matthews = Image
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checkii wrote:It's cool to hate on Chosta, I get it. But the prejudice that people take into his posts makes people so stupid it's hilarious to read. I take every gif I watch (which is A LOT) with a humongous grain of salt. But I don't let that grain of salt get into my eye and blind me to whatever truth can be found in what I'm watching. He is not any worse than any other poster here, and the people who claim he is just don't know what they're talking about. The demonization has gotten ridiculously out of hand.

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